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Monday, February 11, 2019
HOROHOPU
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ReplyDeleteHi Kourtney great work but you need to start with an opening. I think you need to write a bit more. You need to tell us a bit more stuff about the poi. you also need a title too. I like the photo because it has most of us in it. GREAT WORK.
ReplyDeletethanks for your surport (:
DeleteWow i really like how you told us what you were doing in this photo.But what I would really like to know is your horohopo writing finished??
ReplyDeleteI think that you could talk about what you did to make the game
get harder and harder.You cold also talk about the relay race.From Chloe
I really like how you also told us about the tornament you went to.
ReplyDeleteHi there and I am a student in Room 12 at Mangapapa School. I really like your two comments that you posted. I also like the way you gave me feedback. I finished the blog post and fixed it up.
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